I did this one for Dee the other night, Fiddled with the text a little more to make sure it was a little easier to read. It looks nice visually I think, but I wish I could have kept most of the sentences on the same line.
But It also kind of helps set the mood too, So to me, I think this one works pretty well. I hope you enjoy. ^_^
I think you did really good Jennifer! The story is fun, matches the image, and does help set the mood. I think only the second sentence could have been laid out closer, but otherwise it reads like someones thought's when they are in a hurry and they are just running all over themselves. Very nice!
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I think you did really good Jennifer! The story is fun, matches the image, and does help set the mood. I think only the second sentence could have been laid out closer, but otherwise it reads like someones thought's when they are in a hurry and they are just running all over themselves. Very nice!
I LOVE the compulsive nature of it where it isn't even complete sentence, just things I need to do in a train of thought.
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