Sunday, January 30, 2011

learn the basics.. or else!

And part 11 is posted! Wooo! Almost the end of Jennifer's first outing in this world. but I have a few story's planed out for the future this isn't the last!

Jennifer was having fun yesterday with her new found ability's, But she can't forget that the fun basic rules she's been learning and practicing with can also save her.

This part of the story helps answer a couple of questions that were still unclear. (I felt they were.) And I think it helps move the story along while answering them.


venatus said...

first let me say BEAUTIFUL OUTFIT, now that that's out of the way lovely continuation of the story, adding a sense of danger and bringing back the sense of mystery.

smitty said...

I can practically here the suspense music cue...BUM BUM BUMMM! It was such a great idea to get into the basic rules and the character introduction as part of the first arc. I can't wait to see what happens when she gets into her adventures.

Caitlyn Masked said...

As a total story this arc works very well, but seeing this helps setup future arcs!

Still loving it!

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