Friday, January 21, 2011

Can't keep it togethor



OK! so if the first one set up the confusion and change, this one sets up.. well, you might just have to read it to find out. ^_^

I had to go back and rewrite the next 3 installments though. something i said in part 3 didn't mesh well with the story as it unfolded. Don't worry, I already have part 3 wrote out and the problem fixed. I just need to get the others done now...

This might be a little different then some people were expecting, but thats part of the fun right? Watching how the story unfolds and what's going on. hopefully your as lost as poor Jennifer is, but eager to find out whats going on. like Jennifer! :D















4 comments:

Caitlyn Masked said...

Jennifer,

Great cap! I love how you followed the design of the first part, and how this feels like it is leading up to something really really good. I also like how now that she knows she's female that her thought boxes are pink! Can't wait to see more!

Dee Mentia said...

Honestly, I think is this one of your best captions so far. You are using all the creativity at your disposal, and its all showing up on the page.

SWEETLY done!

smitty said...

curiouser and curiouser...I love how dream like this is. It keeps raising questions and intriguing us and teasing.

venatus said...

so far this is off to a very nice start, can't wait to see were this goes.

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