Friday, August 12, 2011

Skips in time

I probably would have done a much better lay out if I even thought this idea was going to work. I forget what brought it about, but i wanted to see if I could fit in the beginning, the middle, and the end in one single cap and keep it pretty short. leaving everything else up to the reader and fill in some blanks.

it worked out a lot better then I thought it would, so in that regard, it was a success. But I'm not all that happy with the look of this cap. The pictures are fine, the story is what I was going for, but the lay out is kinda ugly to me now. I think I was just really wrapped up with getting more caps out when I made this and some caps got a fun lay out and others got something simple.

I think I hate this layout.. 


venatus said...

nice cap, and why do bastards that cheat on their girlfriends get all the luck :P

Caitlyn Masked said...

Yer right Jennifer. The idea worked out really well, and I think with just a little tweaking in the layout this could make a great cap! As is, it is really good though!

Mistress Simone said...

I like your story-telling method here. It gets to the point and feels fun to read.

Dee Mentia said...

What exactly did you not like about the layout?

The only thing I would even attempt to do would be to go to a landscape format and perhaps lay it out in a clockwise manner, to accent the story a bit more, and perhaps fill the spaces. Not even sure that would work.

If you actually decided to redo it, what would you change?

Jennifer said...

@ Dee

The empty space, rather dull placement of the dialog boxes, and finally the way the blue box hangs off the edge of the caption.

i like the clock wise layout Idea, If I still have the file to edit this thing, I might just do that. Because I do like the story.

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