Friday, December 14, 2012

Not in charge

I'm starting to feel a little better, but I  still think my recent captions need just a bit more work. Which is why I basically rewrote today's entire cap, before I felt like it was ready to be posted.

I wish I kept the first draft, but I'm just happy to still have something, anything new to post at all!

Don't get me wrong, I think today's cap is one of my better efforts as of late, but I also have a few waiting to post that just feel like they.. fall short.

And While I'm at it, I would like to send my thoughts and prayers out to those that lost their lives in today's senseless shooting. I thought it was crazy to hear that someone opened fire in a movie theater, but in a elementary school? I have no words.

EDIT: Fixed the repeated text box and replaced it with more dialog. Thanks to Smitty for catching that! 








4 comments:

badside said...

Interesting cap Jenn, not what I was expecting at all. Please keep posting! Love that pic BTW.

Freddi

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Caitlyn Masked said...

Nice Cap Jennifer!! I really enjoyed how his emotions centered on his lack of true dominance as opposed to his new body. And of course it's a stunning image!

smitty said...

Wow! Great use of the dollzverse to twist control inside out. Very squirmy. One minor note, there is a repeated text box starting "It's been so long since"

Jennifer said...

@Badside

I'm glad it surprised you. I was hoping to do something out of the box and it looks like I got it! I do plan to post some more and I thank you for supporting me through all of this. *hugs*

@Caitlynmasked

Thank you. ^_^ I had the image for a little while, but didn't have an idea for it. The story didn't even come from this image, I can't remember what sparked the idea, but I figured the emotions of someone stuck in a living doll might nag on someone more then the physical if they weren't allowed to interact more often.

@ Smitty

I edited the cap, thanks for that catch! And I'm glad that you liked it. It reminded me of the one living doll caption i had made, where the wife punished his cheating husband with a doll that housed a copy of his own conscious mind.

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