Sunday, July 28, 2013

Gym rat

Hey everyone! I know this one is coming to you a little late, but I wanted to let you know that i'm still around and still capping.

It's been quite an eventful week. Mostly sad/bitter sweet news. The bitter sweet news you already know about, but the sad news is more personal for me, my self.  Always something huh?

Anyway, today's caption is for Deementia and I had made it for her birthday. You might notice that it has nothing to do with birthday's and that's because I prefer to make a caption for them that they could enjoy any day of the week. Occasionally, if the story calls for it I will write in the holiday/special day, but mostly I try not to let that tie me down.

I tried to tackle that oblivious transformation angle Dee likes in her TF's, but I I'm not sure if the one sided conversation helped it or distracted from the story.

Either way, I think it still is a pretty good caption. I would like to tackle the oblivious angle a bit more, But for now this is all I have. Might could use a little tightening up, but I Hope you enjoy. ^_^


Mistress Simone said...

I believe i saw this on the haven and I like what you did with this image. It so fits Dee and her humor.

Dee Mentia said...

Yes it was a DEE-lightful caption!

And I'm still going to the gym as often as possible. Having a black card means I get to drink their specially branded water for half-price! REALLY! I haven't tried the tanning booths yet since I like to be really pale, but I know lots of other people use them.

Everyone is so nice there too, always willing to help spot you when you are lifting. The changing room is smelly though so I try to change as quickly as I can, but the guy in the bathroom that hands you a towel when you get out of the shower is really sweet! LOL

Writing the obliviously isn't as easy as one would think, which might be why some won't do them very often. That or those people want to know they've been changed/punished. I love my obliviousness to mesh with a limited acknowledgement that the changes happen, but with a compulsion to keep acting in that oblivious manner.

I have lost track of peoples birthdays as of late! Better hop back on that train!

Jennifer said...

@Mistress Simone:

I do believe you commented on this one at the haven. Or At least I think you did. Glad you think it fits. ^_^


The problem with writting an oblivious caption, is working in the fact that they used to be a guy and you are now a girl. or at least Dressed like one.

It's sort of like trying to work in someone's name naturally into a conversation, when the story is between two friends or a husband and wife etc.

I haven't really tried to do it very often, but with practice it probably wouldn't be too hard. I can often make a name drop sound natural if I really think it's called for. Just one of those areas I need to practice with.

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