Jennifer's TG caps of Defiance

Sorry for the delay folks, I'm still having trouble with viewing pictures. >_> Not sure what's going on, I've restarted and cleared my browser cache but it's still giving me trouble.

Anyway, this is a brand new (like, 20 minutes) Caption for Alexia. YAY! ^_^ (Lady Alexia)

And another question from formspring, this time from the lovely Alexia. ^_^ (Lady Alexia)

(Why don't you learn when to use " then " and when to use " than "?)
(Why don't you learn when to use " to " and when to use " too "? )

Ohh, ouch! :P Well, I would like to ask you why couldn't you present this question in a more polite manner. But to be honest I didn't know I was doing it. Just like I didn't know I was spelling latter, when I know it's later. It was a subconscious thing, I do it for a lot of stuff, not just "to" and "too", sometimes I forget to check.

I also forget to check proper capitalization and some times have typos and just flat out misspelled words show up in them too. Some times I'll even type up the same word back to back with out even realizing it. I just did it now! With this post! No reason, I know I don't need  2 And's. I just made a mistake while writing out fun erotic story's and then post them here for you all to (hopefully ) enjoy. ^_^


when my muse is going and I'm excited to work on a caption, I get lost in the moment. I try to write from a gut reaction, from the moment I see the picture, to the moment I hit save in comic life I'm mostly on a creative high and I forget to check it five more times before posting it. Now, occasionally I get very paranoid over typos and innocent mistakes and will read and re-read it for a few days, and will even ask 2 to 3 people to help me proof it. Guess what? Some times stuff still gets through! I had to get over my fear of posting something with an error or two a long time ago. Did you know that the recent game dead space 2 had not one, but 3 typos in it? I'm sure there's more, but I'm doing this stuff for free, they spent millions and still had typos.

P.S. You will probably also notice, I have a lot of mistakes with punctuation. Just please be gentle with me.. And thank you caitlyn for the advice! ^_^

Hey Everyone! ^_^ I thought I would give a slight glimpse into the next Jennifer story.

I've got 8 pages of it so far, but I'm not sure how long it will end up being, so I thought I would post a teaser. That being the Picture in today's post, It's of the model that I'm using for the story so far.

I've had a bit of writers block lately and haven't made many captions recently. It's taking me a few days to get through 2 different series length captions. (one being the Jennifer story and the other a Haven Reward.) But I wanted to let everyone know that I'm still working on them. ^_^

P.S.  I tried to do something fancy for the image tease, but any fancier and I would have been there for hours trying to use gimp. lol..

Hey Everyone! ^_^ I'm getting used to posting more often.. Hope I don't get in over my head and run out of stuff.. In the meantime, Enjoy the new caption!


SPOILERS!


I made this one for my good friend nick. He enjoys sweet caps so it gave me a chance to play around with Different themes. This is one of them, I wanted to play up a Sad/sweet moment between two soon to be more then just friends.  For some reason I get a pretty in pink vibe off of this... Just feels like a tg version of the ending or something.

I messed around with the lay out some, Tried to play off of the open image, I like it. ^_^

Hello Everyone, sorry for the absence this weekend. Maybe a new caption will help. ^_^

I owe the idea behind this caption to Dee over at (Dee-lusions of Grandeur) She made a caption that featured two dialogs running in the caption, both seeming to get exactly what they wanted out of a tricky contract. I loved the idea and execution of the caption and it went on to inspire this one here.

I kept the dual dialog idea and to me, the both parties get what they wanted part. Although mine is a little more naughty then the source materiel.. I think it's a bit sexy and humorous and I was pretty happy with it. ^_^

And I have another question. Woo!

(You gonna stop by and say hi, now that Transformative Honeymoons is up and running again? asked by Samantha) 

 That's wonderful news! I checked the one I have listed on my blog, but it show's it's not updated. Do you have another link for your new blog? Happy to hear you  have it going again. ^_^

Sorry about the delay in posting, but I did make up a brand new caption for today's post. ^_^ Also, I have more questions! YAY!

Don't read the rest of this if you haven't read the caption yet.

I've had this picture for.. I don't know, a year or two? It was a fantastic find, the bondage gear, back seat of the car and the confused/nervous expression she has. I just could never come up with any reason as to why she was nervous, in the back of a car and also in bondage.

That is until I was looking through my pictures on my hard drive trying to find something to caption. I looked over the picture and I got a really simple idea.. She's being tricked! It was a plan set in motion a long time ago, now her training is complete and the Mistress finally gets her big pay day from selling off her little sissy slut. :D I tried to convey a sense of nervousness in the dialog and in the way the text boxes are positioned and slightly askew. I also tried to add a bit of erotic humiliation in the mix, but the nervous feeling is what I was mostly going for.

And now the questions. ^_^

(You hint at your cross dressing. Would you consider posting pictures of yourself for us to see?) 

Ohh.. A personal question! Hmm, yes I do Cross dress, but I barely know what I'm doing to be honest.. I don't even own any clothes anymore, I used to have my own pair of high heels but when you live in the house with other people, there's not many places you can hide a full wardrobe of dresses, stockings, heels, and panties. I know my answer will be a disappointment, but I have never truly dressed up to the nines and just relaxed in femme or taking any flattering pictures. 

Actually, now that I think about it, I don't think I've ever wore makeup and dressed at the same time. I've done one or the other at different times,  but that's because I had to make a choice, dress pretty or paint my face. *sigh* Mostly dressing pretty won out, but that's because it was quicker to put on a dress, then lay down a foundation and do my eyes with a little massacre. heh, I tried to do massacre only once! First time I put it on, I didn't get it all off and people were asking why my eyelashes looked the way they did... *blush*

So, With regret, I have to say I can't show any pictures of me dressed, partly because I can't even find enough privacy to dress up. Sorry! :(

 And the next question is about my Jennifer storyline.

(so u r inside the story? ru trapped by that or released? and y am i disappointed its not me? i know i am confused. - jojo) 

Hey jojo Sweetie. ^_^ Lets see if I can answer this question. hmm.. The basic idea of the story is that Jeremy (me) has assumed control of Jennifer. (also me) Jennifer for the most part resides in fantasy's and captions that have featured her, so that's the world's she lives in and now it's the worlds Jeremy lives in. He Is stuck in this world, but he's looking for a way out. I can't say whether or not he will find that exit, but the journey is the fun part! ^_^

I don't remember saying you should be or were disappointed that it's not you in the story, But just because it says my name in the story don't let that stop you from putting your self in her shoes. I encourage it! If you feel that close to the story and character, then that just tells me I've done my job and have made an engaging tale that people love to read and follow along.

If your still confused Jojo, just send me another question or leave a post on the blog, I'll do my best to clear up any remaining confusion.

OK, how about a fun single cap for today? ^_^ And I have another question to answer as well, YAY!

Like most of my captions, I got the idea when I first laid eye's on the picture. I had the idea that Martha (And Now For Something Completely Different ...) had swapped bodies with a Famous porn star thanks to the great shift, And the photo was capturing the moment of her acceptance of her new career... *giggle*

Of course, I had the ending all planed out, but Martha enjoys captions that focus on coming to terms with the change, not just loving being a girl right from the start. So the opening of the story was just explaining how she got there and why she looks like she does in the photo. It's also one of the few caps I've done that focuses more on a punch line ending, rather then the eroticism. Got a few good laughs. ^_^

And now on to the Inquire!

(so if every story develops her character (and u r the author) is that what i am? - a story? for u to develop my character (and other things)? - jojo)

Your not just a story, and Jennifer in the story it self is more then just a story. Anything I've put in the story so far, and everything I will write up for the story is something that I've personally experienced in some way. (mostly just fantasy's I've had and shared with others. ) I love the fact that you have related so closely with Jennifer and I hope I can keep that spark of her that you enjoy so much, once she starts messing around in the fantasy's. I don't want to give anything away, but the fantasy worlds and the little mental construct she can retreat to, will have different purposes for telling the story. 

I guess if I had to describe the differences between them,  the fantasy worlds are physically and emotionally taxing and the mental area is a emotional retreat so she can lick her wounds if she needs too.  But I think I already gave that impression in the previous chapter.

So I was trying to think of something new to post today. I could have just posted a new caption, but as I've mentioned in the past I don't like to post all of my work and then be left with nothing in case I can't find the time to caption anything new. Instead, I thought I would share a early draft of part 3 for the down the rabbit hole story.


I had just got started on the story and was moving past part 3 and made it to part 5 before I hit a wall. Something I had mentioned before in part 3 was causing some problems. That being this line in particular:  "Dead? heavens no! but whether this is real or
not I can't say for sure. but if you have found your self here
then you must be crazy."

I didn't want to suggest that Jennifer was really crazy, it cemented the situation she found her self in a little too much and didn't keep the same air of mystery for the story.  Thinking back It was the best thing I did for the story, going back and rewriting those 3 pages got it all back on track. I just wish I kept all of the deleted text, instead of just part 3. Oh well, I hope you all enjoy this small behind the scenes glimpse. ^_^

So what.. this isn't real? That would make sense.. am I?


Dead? heavens no! but whether this is real or
not I can't say for sure. but if you have found your self here
then you must be crazy.


crazy?


as a loon! mad, bonkers, broken, loco!


oh.. so I was right. well.. why am I.. like this?


a girl? silly thing, your Jennifer! don't you know who you are?


Jennifer? but she's fake, only in my head and a few story's online.


yes yes.. I see your point. but if you are not Jennifer, then who are you?


I.. well. that's simple, I'm Jeremy!


but you are a girl! what an awful name for such a pretty young thing...


yeah but.. OK, so you have a point. I'm Jennifer. but.. why?


don't ask me, I wouldn't dare to hazard a guess! now that you are here and
know who you are once again, we can move on. ask me anything, I'm here at your service.


OK.. then answer me this. who are you? for real this time! none of that you are who you are crap.


you can't ask me that.


What? WHAT? you said to ask you anything.


I did.. but you can't ask me what I don't already know.


so you even know who you are? great.. you sound like your going to be lots of help!


fine princess.. If you don't want to know where you are then I will go help some other gender confused little girl.

 Hey! Another day, Another caption up to read. ^_^ I'm not sure how long I will keep this up, but It feels good to have something new up each day.

I made this one for courtney over at the Haven, In the past I've made her cute funny captions, nothing too erotic. I fixed that error immediately and Tried to make a couple naughty caps for her. This is the last caption I did for her and it went over pretty well with her. ^_^

If you haven't read the caption, don't read the rest of this post. Spoilers ahead!

The caption being told in the Style of an evaluation report for the student was inspired by Smitty's (Smitty's TG Caps)

 Hey! How about a new 9 part series? It's not a continuation of My Jennifer storyline, but It's a a recent caption I made for Dalene over at the Haven.

If you haven't read the caption yet,  skip over this next part.

There was nothing that fit, I needed to start in the 1920's so I needed a model that had done a photo shoot like that. Then I remember Mila had a perfect picture for the opening! The rest of the idea came together pretty easily, I got all four of the other lifetimes done in one night.

But I had a harder time with the 1920's time line, Giving the main character Dylan a  reason for deserving a curse like this. I had to completely twist his character in one afternoon's time. But I loved painting Mila as the goddess while speaking Russian too!

 The shifting through time idea came from watchmen, although in that story it all felt like it took place in one instant, and in mine it just sort of moves you back and forth through the past, present, and future.

 I have a new question to answer, Thanks jojo! ^_^

(so does each story have a lil impact on you (and me) as u/i imagine your way thru it? - jojo) 

Yes, Every story should develop her character as I go along. (I'm hoping)  I want to take it slow and start off small, but I have some bigger plans for some of the worlds later on. 


I've been doing some rewards over at the haven and tomorrow is the last day to get in on it. If you want to find out more, please follow this link.

I've got a few more questions the last two days, so I thought I would go ahead and answer them.

I'm sorry there is no caption for today's post, but the last time I answered a question and posted a caption, the post ended up being very looong. And I don't like to distract to much from the caption itself.

But the picture to the left here, I did the color edits my self. YAY! I thought I would share it even though it's such a simple edit. But I have next to no skill with other photo editing software, so I was pretty proud I pulled it off. OK on to the questions!

(Do you suck cock on the side? I bet you do to come up with those captions. You sissy) 

O_o Everyone, this question is brought to you by Sasha. (TG captions, comics, images and stories.)  She's obsessed with my kink for blowjobs. Of course I've giving her every reason to be, but she already knows I have never really sucked cock. Almost everything in my captions don't come from personal experiences, (A few exceptions here and there) but just from my fetish's/fantasy's/kinks. Still, I did come close to giving head.. But maybe that's a story for another time. (It's rather anti-climatic anyway.)

(does each fantasy leave a lil impact. just a bit more each time? jojo) 

Ahh! A question for my Jennifer storyline. Thank you jojo! ^_^ Yes, each harmful fantasy should leave a lasting impact. Some will be little, and some will be huge! and since I want to keep the story going for a long while, (I don't plan on ending it anytime soon.) I have to be careful with how it's all handled. I think I have a good grasp on how to do that and keep the story moving at an enjoyable pace. I don't want to give a way to many things, but for a constant victim of horrible situations, I have to find a way to balance it out, so Jennifer dosen't just eventually spaz out. 

Thank you both for your questions! ^_^

Maybe that should be, Can I trust you to answer questions? Because I also have a few questions to reply to as well as the new caption for today. YAY!!!

So, Let's get to the caption first. I did this one for Jillisa at the haven, a wonderfully sweet girl that is very submissive, So I had a blast writing up a few captions for her and making her into a pet girl. The opening here is very simple, I'm still not sure how I feel about the 'showed me proof ' line. Seems a little corny that I only touched on that subject instead of playing it up.  but I really wanted to focus on one thing any way. What if you did have a chance to live out a fantasy?

 An old favorite of mine, the magical collar, provided that chance and then I just had to write up the conversation Jillisa and Jeremy would have. There was only so much that little collar could do to help her out with being Slave, She needed someone to take control. I don't think I know anyone in real life that I could trust that much to give them full control over my life like that, but it worked for jillisa in the caption.  It's one of my sweeter/willing captions and I think it shows that not all submission/slave caps have to be dark and forced.

And now onto the Questions!

(how'd you get to be so awesome/talented) 
Just am. 


No, I'm joking! *giggle* I have to say this question left me a little stunned, I really enjoy making my captions and running this blog, it's all lots of fun and I couldn't dream of doing something else as a hobby. This is a little hard to answer with out sounding like I have a giant ego, or that I have no confidence in my work. I've been very proud for quite a few captions I've done over the years, but I also have made a few that didn't turn out like I hoped. Sometimes It's my fault and sometimes I couldn't find the right set of photos to work with my idea. If I had to pin point it, It's just that I enjoy making them. I've been challenging my self a lot lately and I think it's really helped me grow as a caption artist.

I owe a lot to my friend's for that, back when I first started captions I just did my work on my own and no one else wanted to discuss the craft. Even a few of those older caption artists I knew, still won't share their own experiences and I think that's a real shame. It's helped me a lot hearing how someone else would have used this picture or what they did for one of their own captions. Dee at  (Dee-lusions of Grandeur)

Here's another reply to my little from spring gadget to the top right of the page.

(hey thx for the mention. I'm flattered. yes, i agree that if it were to happen in real life it'd be a nightmare (decided not to correct the Freudian typo) but the tantalizing question is just how far can you push it - when you so want to push it - before) 

The reply gets cut off, but I thought I would address the question of how far I can push the darker fantasy's that might show up in the future of the story.  I've made lots of darker story's over the years and though most come from my own twisted thoughts, I have never put my self in the story's them self's. 

All of them push my buttons in some way, but for this story it will be a little different seeing as how it's not only me in the story, but I'm aware that all the nasty stuff that could possibly take place is because of me as well. So just fantasizing about a slave auction (for example) is one thing, writing it out with actual consequences is going to be a marked difference. For one, I want to keep the fantasy's erotic and enjoyable for the readers and my self the writer. But at the same same time I want to show that these fantasy's should remain just that! 

It will be a hard balance to pull off, but I'm very excited about giving it a shot.  If any one is wondering when the next installment is coming, I'm afraid It will have to wait for the time being. I'm helping out with some rewards at the haven and have some caption debt to take care of.  Don't hold me to this, but I hope to get started on the next story arc this month.

I'm sorry I didn't get the rest of your comment, but if you would like you can post the rest of it in the comments section. ^_^ 

P.S. Sorry there is no caption with today's post, I want to keep a considerable back log of captions so I can always have something new to post to the blog in case something comes up in real life. I wouldn't want to run out and not be able to find the time to write up a new one for the post.  And lately I've had quite a few personal problems That I'm trying to over come. I want to thank, Ashley Caitlyn, Cindy, Dee, Jamie, Mistress Simone, Nick, Samantha, Sasha, And Smitty for all of their wonderful support. I know I can be hard to deal with, but I hope you all understand it's a problem I have had all my life and if I could, I would make it go away and just enjoy your friendships. They all mean a lot to me.

I can't Guarantee that I will continue to update every single day like I have been doing, but I also didn't want to disappoint any of my readers out there with nothing new to view today.

Which brings us to today's caption. The idea was simple, what was she looking at? heh, I decided that it was a bar she was nervous/excited about entering. I just needed a reason for why she had to visit the bar and why she was a she at all in the first place. I figured the bar is where Henri picked up his little fling that he cheated on his wife with, so it became the place for the rest of his punishment.

The idea of him taking his wife's powers as a witch for granted sounded like a fun one. I grew up watching bewitched and Daren did it all the time! I'm still not sure why she put up with him acting like he was in charge, she obviously had the power to rip him a new one. So what if Daren cheated on her? That was sort of the inspiration for this caption here, I didn't rip off bewitched directly but the idea of knowing your wife is a witch and then betraying her in some way made for a fun story I think. ^_^

And not to mention another caption for today.I made this for lexxstrum as a reward for the save the Rachel drive that is going on right now over at that the haven. If you want to support a great cause and get a few captions at the same time, you should check it out!

I really liked how this one turned out. But the tag line was all thanks to Mistress Simone ( Modern Goddess: The Shrine of Decadence)
 She gave many wonderful suggestions until finally we came to the one you see here in the caption. Not sure why I never tried a horror themed TG caption before... But now I have and I hope you all enjoy it. ^_^

I have to say, I'm missing posting up a new piece of the story each day. I'm eager to get started on the next story arc and I can see from the comments that so is everyone else! That's just.. wow. You guys are awesome!

Now on to the questions. 

(Hey! what happens when I type something in this box? I've been way too busy lately, but I hope to have a little more time now - looks like you are having fun, and enjoying yourself - I hope so - take care.)

It asks me a question. ^_^ And yes, I am enjoying my self and it's great to hear you might have more time to mess around soon. I'm going to guess and say this is Samantha. (or is that Stacy?) I hope all is well with you and things are steadily getting better, I've been wondering how your appointment's have been going and how you are doing.  I wish you the best of luck! ^_^

 (terrific tale/(tail?). d/k why you just think it's personal for you tho! luvving it - jojo) 

Thank you for the wonderful comment. ^_^ I think it's personal for me since I'm striping my self a bit bare to put Jennifer in her fantasy worlds, But there's no reason why you and others can't find it personal too. And I'm flattered that you do! *blush* I'm sure many people can relate to some of the fantasy's I've presented in my captions over the years, stuff they find erotic but would never want to come close to in real life. Like the coin operated blow job machine and the brainwashing sissy school Jennifer mentions in the story. I love that sort of stuff in captions, but if it were to really happen it would be a nightmare! (I guess the brainwashing would take care of that though.)

Here it is! The end of part 1. It took 16 days for this to wrap up and I'm very pleased with how it turned out. I would love to hear what everyone thinks about it and what it might mean for the future of the story. Any questions you might have, I will gladly answer. ^_^


Don't read this if you haven't read today's installment.



OK, So did the ending feel rushed? if yes, then good! Jennifer shouldn't be going just yet.. she's not at ease just yet and though she might have a good grasp of what she can do in her own little world, she is obviously not ready for the fantasy worlds.

I think this ending will play well with the future story lines and help me build on her character. I hope you all enjoyed it!

 First of all, I want to thank Caitlyn from Caitlyn's mask's (Caitlyn's Masks) for editing today's Picture. She added the color that you see and even the little glimpse of a collar on her neck. She also made various color variations until I finally decieded on the pink and teal look. Thanks bunch's!

Read the caption before reading the rest of this post first.


And as for the story today, I figure if you find your self in a made up fantasy world, then things won't be all joy and sunshine running through the flowers. There's always the question of how did I get here and will I get out? So I think it's natural for Jennifer to be enjoying her self one moment, and then worried the next.

The black and white look with a slight bit of color should suggest that Jennifer is losing her grip, if only for a moment. And the fact that the voice points out the door to her before she knows it's there is another clue that Jennifer isn't completely comfortable in the new realm. Basically her thoughts are still a little scattered and though she knows how to conjure up an item or a new body, the voice planted the though in her head and she immediately pictured it next to her. Hopefully suggesting that Jennifer is still vulnerable mentally. Even Jennifer's text boxes are over lapping the picture again, like back when she first woke up in this world.

So there's a couple of the tricks I've been trying to use through out the story, not only are her words voicing her concerns, but each caption has some sort of visual clue as to Jennifer's well being. (Mostly it was the text box thing for the first few.)

More rules? Well don't worry to much, Because the first story arc is almost finished! Hope you are all still with me! you are? YAY! ^_^

Not exactly spoilers below, but If you have read the caps leading up to this moment then you are safe to continue.

I believe all of these rules and the character development will give me a lot to work with in the future. Jennifer's ability to craft the world around her and her self image is a great example of that. I can use just about any set of photo's there is, as long as it will fit into the story.

Yesterday's post made me a little nervous, it's one thing to mess around with fantasy's that will remain fantasy's. But when I started this story I didn't think I would get so personal, but if the idea is that Jennifer can move through fantasy worlds She (me) has created, then of course the fantasy's she would hope to make real would also be fair game.

I have my reasons for putting it in the story. For one, It's a story being made for me, so I've tried to fit in everything I enjoy in TG caps. And two, I can't make a victim and keep her in awful situations with out a little breathing room now and again. Hopefully it will all mesh together well enough to keep this story going for a long while. ^_^

And there you have, the facts of life! Sorry about that, just had to do it...

Some of these fantasy's of mine have a little bit of truth to them, obviously I have a kink for this sort of stuff. but I know what's truly just a fantasy and whats something I might give a shot. The whole sub thing I have going is no secret and is something I do look for in a relationship. So thankfully for Jennifer not all of my fantasy's are just dark and mean. ^_^

I do wish I could go into these caps a little more, but I don't want to spoil anything for first time readers. But, once you read the cap maybe the above little blurt will make sense.


And look! New gadget! ----->