Sunday, January 20, 2013

Girl at the dress shop

I nearly went with another picture and a different, cleaner ending for this one. But after letting it sit for a while and then reading it today, I actually think it works very well. It perfectly shows the confused adolescence feeling that I was going for.

Though none of my characters are ever underage, I still wanted to capture that feeling in a 18 year old boy (at least). or late bloomer, if you will.

I listed this one as forced, but that's not entirely accurate. but neither is willing. I'll just leave it up to the readers. 






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4 comments:

  1. snorgzJanuary 20, 2013 at 3:45 PM

    Great caption with a seductive story, sexy stuff!

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  2. Caitlyn MaskedJanuary 21, 2013 at 5:41 AM

    Wonderful caption Jennifer! I love the 'going down the rabbit's hole' feel to it. Feeling like he has to go along and even getting turned on by it, even though he wants to be the 'man'.

    Mm... are you fingers hurting from pushing those buttons so hard!?

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  3. badsideJanuary 21, 2013 at 10:26 AM

    I think the pic matches the cap perfectly. I can feel the confusion in the narrator's mind. S/he won't ever be able to stop CDing now! :^)

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  4. JenniferJanuary 23, 2013 at 3:04 AM

    @ snorgz

    Thank you! ^_^

    @ Leeanne Montgomery

    I like, no! Love! the way you think! *giggle* Pretty sure our heroine in the story would never think of that!

    @ Caitlyn Masked

    Glad you enjoyed it! When I made it, outside of having to put in the explanation for why she just came all over her new stockings, I wanted to convey that feeling of just getting in deeper and deeper. Sort of like the old lycos dress shop caps I used to read.

    and I'm pretty sure my finger has a few more button pushing days left.. *giggle*

    @ Badside

    Thank you darling. ^_^ i'm glad the confusion came through strongly enough. Some times with a cap like this, the reasons for the character crossdressing when they don't want, feels very forced and just an excuse to get him in to some panties. I'm pretty happy with how it turned out, and for a single length cap, think that it's fleashed out as well as it could be.

    About the only reason I wanted to change the pic, or thought about changing it, is because at the time I thought it felt out of place for him to just play with him self as soon as he gets home. But, like you said, the confusion helps that part out I think. Especially considering he was supposed to be a shy, late bloomer who was wrestling with some pretty strong feelings.

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