I've noticed some speculation in the comments and.. I'm completely elated about that! That says I am making this story captivating enough for the few minutes you visit and read it and Just.. yay! Very happy about that, I just wish I could share them all with you. But As Dee pointed out, posting them once a day like this is sparking more interest then just throwing them all up at once. (thanks to Ashley for the Suggestion! ) I'll try my best to avoid 'jumping the shark'. But who knows what poor lost Jennifer will have to do to find her way out. :D
Woo! I'm up to part 8 in case anyone is keeping score with what I've already wrote up. ^_^
Jennifer,
ReplyDeleteAnother fine addition! Again you answer one question only to ask a few more! I am loving this. And I now love the different look for each cap. At first it was a little disconcerting.. but I should have known that you were doing that on purpose.
I promise not to doubt you again!
nice addition, I love were this is going.
ReplyDeleteI love the interplay between her and the mysterious voice. Although I'm not so sure she can trust it to give good advice.
ReplyDelete@ Caitlyn I'm so happy you have loved how the story has played out. I try to keep some new question coming in, or an old one being answered in each one. And yes I did mean to use the lay out to help convey how confused and disconcerting this is all is for her.
ReplyDelete@ Venatus Thank you! Glad your looking forward to My little trip. ^_^
@ Smitty I don't want to spoil anything by answering yes or no. but, I do love the interplay between the voices as well. as soon as I put it in part 2 and wrote up the next two in the series, I could see a lot of possibility's with the added voice. It's allows for a lot of story telling and character development with out changing up the original idea for this at all.