Monday, September 12, 2011

The customer is always right part part 7

So Today is good as day as any to jump back into this series, right? Hope you think so, because I'm posting two for today and will go back to 1 a day tomorrow. I do have it all finished, so there won't be a break till the end of Chapter two. Hope it's worth the wait. ^_^


Oh, and I have a few questions I'll need to get to. But i've been pretty busy around my house, sorry everyone! Please know I'll be answering them. ^_^




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2 comments:

  1. smittySeptember 13, 2011 at 12:18 AM

    You've done a great job of picking up the pace where it left off. No one would know there were months between the previous page and these two. And again, I love how you handle taking a willing protagonist, putting them in a cliche setting, and making that the central focus and tension. By pulling us in and making us think how we would actually react if this happened in the flesh instead of just fantasy, you let us provide our own tension that mirrors Jennifer's. Great job, I can't wait to see how this turns out, even though I already know how it will.

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  2. UnknownSeptember 13, 2011 at 5:03 PM

    ok smithy already got to everything I wanted to say. as usual excellent cap and I'm glad to see this coming back.

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