This is the finished cap, but I thought the title fit for a number of reasons. First, you can already tell there's no female picture so I'm sure you know she's working on the world around her. And also, it helps play up the sort of dynamic Jennifer and the voice in her head will have in the future.
It's been fun building up the two as the story progresses. It's also made me think that anyone she meet's just can't be cookie cutter entity's. So, I'm looking forward to fleshing out new characters for the story. It will be different from this however, since they may never show up again in the story. They just have to make an impact the first time around.
This post is dedicated to my pet
pookie who passed away close to 3 weeks ago now. I never mentioned it here personally on the blog because I tend to clam up about such things. (but my friends may say different.) But tonight I had a meal that I haven't had in a good while. And from past experience I knew she loved it. So I went to give her a little once I was done, I forgot she wasn't around. so I got a little choked up. Miss her still.
EDIT: I just fixed a problem with the first text box being cut off. I didn't notice it had changed when i made one last edit before posting. Sorry about that!
ohh, your powers grow and your guide is getting a little feisty (just a little for now) and promise of other worlds, wonderful how you keep managing to keep things building up.
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ReplyDeleteI'm losing ways to say how much I am enjoying this. I really like the way even the voice is changing. Its almost as the more comfortable Jennifer gets in her world, the more the voice changes to match it. And even without a picture of Jennifer... we can all see that brilliant grin. Keep up the fantastic work!
I love the interruption technique of putting your text over the voices. You do such great foreshadowing in this to. You make the lovable dovable character and hint at these other worlds where her powers won't work the same. Hmm...I wonder what kind of things could happen to her in those?
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