tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-496458571141153682.post2337338981260951431..comments2023-11-02T04:46:26.102-07:00Comments on Jennifer's TG caps of Defiance: It never doesjenniferhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08880865822966589937noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-496458571141153682.post-71053358266788224652011-05-10T22:06:47.869-07:002011-05-10T22:06:47.869-07:00@ alectra
I like the idea you have there and don&...@ alectra<br /><br />I like the idea you have there and don't mind the suggestion at all, But I think it would change the tone of the cap a bit. It does give Simone the upper hand though.<br /><br />@ Dee<br /><br />True, and with a new caption a lot could have changed from this cap, and to the other one. That way i could explain away any slight differences in the model's as just the passing of time. I've done that before.<br /><br />@ Caitlyn<br />Being a sub my self, I don't like to get the upper hand in a caption either. But I had wanted to make something enjoyable for Simone, so it was possibly one thing I could have done to hit her prefs a little closer to home. <br /><br />I'm glad you enjoyed the argument, and I do like the caption. I just felt that after the shock of being turned into a girl and tied up on the cabinet, it may have shaked his faith in his friend a little. <br /><br />Of course, all I would be doing to make it seem more real is establish how close they are anyway, I guess this way it's sort of like an unspoken trust mark had for his friend. Too bad power corrupts absolutely. <br /><br />@ Venatus<br /><br />I didn't think about it being sweet in a way. After she's finished with the elixir, it won't matter if she didn't want to be his slave or not. it will make her happy in the end to serve him.<br /><br />@ Betty<br /><br />Very happy to hear you enjoyed this caption. And very pleased to hear you thought it was a slow seduction I guess I did get that across in the story. ^_^ Thank you!Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08278508284141041193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-496458571141153682.post-63136537508891395602011-05-10T19:39:01.961-07:002011-05-10T19:39:01.961-07:00What a delicious cap. Love the slow seduction, and...What a delicious cap. Love the slow seduction, and then the realization of how far she has gone.Bettyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04716711959426356830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-496458571141153682.post-14373412009464245872011-05-10T19:32:44.837-07:002011-05-10T19:32:44.837-07:00ah I remember this one, very sweet, and knowing ho...ah I remember this one, very sweet, and knowing how it will end does manage to make it a bit sweeter to see her cave in that first time.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14788195780467172313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-496458571141153682.post-21368415256770149232011-05-10T07:13:40.591-07:002011-05-10T07:13:40.591-07:00I like the cap as is. Of course I don't like ...I like the cap as is. Of course I don't like subs getting the upper hand, so that may sway me a bit. But I think the argument went just the right amount of time. You established they were friends, so there is already a trusting bond. Lets face it... if anyone can screw anyone over, its a close friend.Caitlyn Maskedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02732033913089350905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-496458571141153682.post-88935689590007308012011-05-10T06:40:43.135-07:002011-05-10T06:40:43.135-07:00As far as Chloe getting the upper hand, THAT is wh...As far as Chloe getting the upper hand, THAT is what sequels are for, right? Just keep the same color schemes you used here with a different picture and I'm sure you'll come up with something that is truly ACES!Dee Mentiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07798903090538917010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-496458571141153682.post-34435775380021811882011-05-10T01:18:26.214-07:002011-05-10T01:18:26.214-07:00First of all the sky isn't the limit anymore ^...First of all the sky isn't the limit anymore ^-^<br />You can go nuts with a pic Jennifer...<br />Now onto the cap:<br /><br />Loved that expression on Chloe... so unruly eyes... ^o^, this could have worked too, check:<br /><br />So do you want to take a sip to this delicious tea?<br />No, what are you trying to do to me?<br /><br />Ouh just, trying to subdue you, here take only sip...<br /><br />Not doing until you do, i want to see it's really not poisoned.<br /><br />(Obviously the captor is stupid and takes a sip).<br /><br />See nothing wrong, ughhh, what wrong with me?.<br /><br />Ouh nothing, you see you have been stupid enough to take a sip of your subduing tea, now untie me slave, i'm a little uncomfortable in this position...<br /><br />As you wish mistress.<br /><br />Just a humble different trying on your great cap Jennifer, hope you don't mind :3<br /><br />You already know that Simone likes to win, so that could have another ending ^-^ a little crazy i know but another ending afterall...Alectrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03568780951812037124noreply@blogger.com