tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-496458571141153682.post2037934086884846431..comments2023-11-02T04:46:26.102-07:00Comments on Jennifer's TG caps of Defiance: Everything I ever wanted: 4 part series. an All or Nothing tale!jenniferhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08880865822966589937noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-496458571141153682.post-2781302512941868552011-07-15T09:28:29.571-07:002011-07-15T09:28:29.571-07:00Wow, Jennifer! This was very sexy. I guess I don...Wow, Jennifer! This was very sexy. I guess I don't have to say that this sort of cap is right up my alley, do I? Great work. You're right. It would have been a good cap anyway with just the straight, expected transformation (you've certainly got enough talent to spice up any "bland" cap). But the twist really makes it stand out. I didn't see it coming, but it thrilled me when it did.<br /><br />I love the collage of different voices talking, almost at once sometimes, and then the way they suddenly switch. You really bring out the competitor in Simon (and then the loser, too). One of the things I like about this universe, I think, is that you can get such sharp contrasts between the victor and the defeated.<br /><br />The tattoo was great and you used it for a wonderful effect: the trigger for Simon to find out the truth. It emphasizes the humiliation, possession, and permanence that is all so very...perfect.<br /><br />Love it! Thanks so much for alerting of this, too. I love your site (even though I know I should comment more).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-496458571141153682.post-51170472272818549492011-06-23T21:15:27.951-07:002011-06-23T21:15:27.951-07:00Great, great, great cap! It works so well with the...Great, great, great cap! It works so well with the squirm inducing humiliation that it would have been great as a straight forward homage to Trisha's story, but the twist takes it to the next level. Rereading it makes it even more uncomfortably hot!smittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09042390282227601322noreply@blogger.com